Monday, February 27, 2017

Dandelion Wine Analysis

In my opinion, Dandelion Wine is boring as the shit. However, that doesn't mean it's written poorly. A few of the stories that I "liked" (relatively) were the story of the happiness machine, and the story of the Witch ladies. In the story of the happiness he successfully described how true happiness resides in caring for other humans rather than in a computer like machine. He describes a man who seeks to build a machine that can make anyone happy. But, while he is creating it the machine wedges it's way between him and his loving relationship with his family. Also, when people enter the machine they feel happy at first but then they feel sad because they realize that all things displayed in the happiness machine will be unattainable to them in real life. This causes the inventor, Leo Auffman, to realize that true happiness resides in family. This is a brilliant way of describing the human condition in which we seek out love and the need to care for others. He also describes the scene taking place using very descriptive and poetic language.
Another intriguing story written by Ray Bradbury was the story of how Elmira Brown thought that Clara Goodwater was a Witch. In this chapter Elmira Brown believes Clara Goodwater to be a Witch and when she goes to the Honey Suckle Ladies Lodge in order to become the head of the organization after a vote, she is beaten nearly unanimously voted against and Clara Goodwater ends up as the leader, only for Elmira to fall down the stairs and miraculously survive uninjured and she is allowed to become the President of the organization. This story was well written because not only was it described in great detail and poetically, but it showed how humans are so easily deceived by outside appearances and how we sometimes ignorantly fail at being able to empathize for and understand others.

Thursday, February 16, 2017

An Awkward First Kiss

Aren't they all?
Cold wind whipping at my
half zipped coat.
Or half unzipped.
We both stand there shivering.
Dinner is over,
gifts have been exchanged,
and now it is time for the thought
that has been prying at the back of our minds
for 4 months.
I move in for a hug.
But this hug is different,
This time our heads face each other
and our eyes pierce one another's skull.
We lean in and..
No.
It is not right.
We stop, midway.
5 minutes of silence ensues.
Feet inch closer and closer together,
people walking by,
unconcerned of the event moments away from occurrence.
Shadows dance with the moonlight
as we gave up into the night sky;
there are no stars,
just an infinitely vast black blanket
caging us all inside.
Regardless of the blanket we are still shivering.
We try one more time.
This time it feels right.
We reach in, heads facing, but...
Our heads turn away yet again.
Oh! But it is too late.
The hug is inevitable and has begun to take place.
And I can feel the weight of all of my friends and family
and they say do it.
And I listen.
Some may call it a peck
but a first kiss,
no matter how awkward,
is still a first kiss.

Wednesday, February 8, 2017

My favorite writing genre is Science Fiction. The reason why Sci-Fi is my favorite genre to read (and write), is because I find it very immersing and interesting writing about a possible future world that seems impossible but if given the right causes, could be very believable. I like these types of stories because it puts characters in situations unheard of in the real world but still allows them to react the same way people would today. I generally like science fiction where "getting the science right" is a very big factor in the book, like in the book The Martian by Andy Weir (although Mars' atmosphere wouldn't be powerful enough to create devastating dust storms, or at least the type of dust storm described in the book.) However my favorite book of all time, by far, is the Ultimate Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams which is Science Fiction but is also extremely comical. 

Thursday, February 2, 2017

Maya Angelou's List of the top 10 Writing Rules

Maya Angelou gave a list of her top ten writing rules. Personally, rule number 10: Keep rising, makes the most sense to me because it is saying that no matter what may drag you down or block your path to success, you must do everything you can to overcome the obstacle that stands before you. This is very important because if you were not to do this, if you were to let the evil win out and not get back up and fight back, then you would have completely given up on writing and would have no ability to return to it.  One of her rules I need to work on the most is rule number 9: always do your best. The reason I struggle with this rule is because many times when I write I do not have the time or will to do my best whether it is the worry that if I put my heart into something I might not have enough time to finish it and get the desired grade, or whether it is the fear that if I put my all into something and it comes back torn up, that I wouldn't know how to react. Of her 10 rules the one I practice most is rule number 4: Laugh. I love to laugh and therefore I do it as often as possible, I don't know why but that feeling you get when you laugh and genuinely have a good time is one of the most appealing feelings in the entire world and it is one of the things that inspires me to write.
Over the course of my 14 year life I have been able to categorize all people into just 5 groups. The first group are the type of people on the far right who will say and do truly awful things that have an extremely bad negative effect on society. The next group of people is the type of people on the far left who get offended when there is really nothing said or done that should offend a normal human being. Then there are the people towards the middle who enjoy criticizing those on the two far extremes, which is personal the group I partake in. The next group of people can also be placed in the middle and they are the type of people who either don't care or have no means or reason to care. The final group of people is the type of people who cant be place at any single point on the chart of left and they are the people who actually make a positive change in the world. All though they are far and few between, they do exist and we all should strive to become like them. On one final note I would like to say that honestly, as kids we can only really be placed in the middle because 99% of our opinions are formed by our parents and the only two groups in the middle are the people who joke about the extremists and the people who simply don't care, but, there are still people who pretend to be on the far sides.
Pahz Cherelin is currently a ninth grader in School of the Arts. He is taking a creative writing class in which he hopes to improve his grammar. He turned 14 in May. He lives in Rochester, New York with his parents and his 3 pets, his dog Rascal, his other dog Gremlin, and his sister, Tierra. He enjoys writing, sports, video games, and food. He likes writing comically and enjoys writing deep and dark short stories and poems. His favorite book is The Ultimate Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy; his favorite movie is Deadpool. He has long term depression (not really) because in 1st grade (this is a true story by the way) he met this girl, he did not know her at the time but apparently she knew him. She said hello and was very excited when she found out that they were in the same class. She was so excited in fact that she jumped out of her seat on the bus and made out with Pahz. Pahz did not know this girl but he let her do her thing. Within the week they were boyfriend and girlfriend. They were together all through first and second grade. He thought that nothing could tear them apart… Until she moved to a new school. He was scared and afraid without her. Seemingly a miracle occurred. He transferred schools so that he was in the same school as her. When he walked into class on his first day he was so excited to see her… with another man. That’s right, after only one week of being apart she had already gotten together with another man. And that kids is why Pahz Cherelin has long term depression…